I love the tangle of them all together, Frank and Mikey's friendship, the complicated and dysfunctional but also loving relationship between Mikey and Gerard and, of course, the perfect, gradual building love between Frank and Gerard. You've balanced them all neatly, not sacrificing the friendship or the brotherly connection -- both so important to the story -- in order to focus entirely on the romance.
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I love the tangle of them all together, Frank and Mikey's friendship, the complicated and dysfunctional but also loving relationship between Mikey and Gerard and, of course, the perfect, gradual building love between Frank and Gerard. You've balanced them all neatly, not sacrificing the friendship or the brotherly connection -- both so important to the story -- in order to focus entirely on the romance.